Summer Series of Saves #2024: dismantling the essay

I am unsure where the wheels fell off the bus this year, and I can’t pinpoint the moment—maybe I was trying to do too much, or maybe the students are still recovering from 2020, perhaps? (And also, as an aside, I went to look up prior posts about this, and WordPress has done this weird thing with some of my links. I shall deal with this later.) Some students went to my prinicipal and complained about a few things, one of them being I gave them “too many essays” to write. Now, some of these “essays” were focused on parts of an essay, trying new things, and quick writes. I told them time and again this is what they need to know how to do now and for the rest of their academic careers.

They took it personally.

One of the grand and perpetual expectations of we ELA teachers is we teach how to write essays, and there is no shortage of advice, materials, books, PD, from the creative to the formulaic, we have mentor texts, learning targets, dissection of the whole and constructing the deconstructed.

So what’s my plan for this year? Again, try to organize it in a way that students get it. I am focused on the success of a few students sprinkled throughout the day, from GenEd to Honors, who used the graphic organizers and materials I provided and pushed through them to truly get how they help and scaffold essay writing.

But moreoever, I am exhausted by the individuality of teaching: the whole-class instruction does not seem to be working, and there is no one cause or factor. Setting up partner groups immediately for workshop might be one fix to this– more on this later. (Thinking Dr. Catlin Tucker’s work on stations…). I have had great success with the Puget Sound Writing Project/National Writing Project’s workshop model for years, but this year…oof. Maybe it was all that time isolated from other humans?

The plan: this post is somewhat of a placeholder for my thoughts and a launch pad: next I’ll organize the calendar of what happens when, and why, for students. Stay tuned.

Essay List

Some other posts about essay writing:

A little help, please.

An ELA teacher asked about our thoughts (other ELA teachers) and their thoughts about students using sites like SparkNotes, etc. One teacher said students who use these sites are, in her words, “lame” and “lazy.”

I’m immediately transported back to 1979, 1980, when I was assigned Romeo and Juliet, and immediately drove to the local bookstore to pick up a copy of Cliffs Notes. I think I also ended up buying some for Oliver Twist, too. And what those study guides provided me was invaluable: I could understand amazing stories with just a little support or scaffolding, an access point. Now, remember, this was ‘back in the day’ when a high school student was assigned a text from the dusty canon, and we were expected to 1. read it, 2. understand it with possibly a teacher lecture, and 3. write essays, by hand, about it. Or take worksheet quizzes. I wasn’t taught anything about annotating or Socratic Seminars, didn’t have the internet or search engines, and wasn’t told to go to the library to read other analyses of these vintage works of literature. One reason East of Eden by John Steinbeck is one of my favorite books is that I read it on my own, “for fun,” and understood the thematic messages in high school. That was a success for me. And it came about with help.

And again: we weren’t allowed to talk in class.

I will never truly understand the archetypal English teacher, one with a degree in English Literature and who knows all the ‘isms’ and movements along the linear path of Western works. Maybe it’s their own curse of knowledge, that their education centered and explored the themes, symbols, and motifs of predominately men’s perspectives on the big questions of life.

But I refuse to feel stupid or less than because not only did I use those resources to help me in high school, and I help students use them now, in tactical and specific ways. And yes, I do sometimes feel underwater when it comes to the deluge of misinformation, disinformation, and algorithmic atrocities that come up in shallow searches. Students can copy/paste with lightning speed but never be struck by knowledge, or any measure of “eureka!” The art in the language arts means looking at the tools, shiny or rusted, and allowing students to stumble. I try to include the ‘why’ with every lesson and help them make connections; at this point in the year, the scaffolds are being dismantled, and they need to do more of this independently.

And SparkNotes is awesome.

My tactics include a multimodal approach:

  1. Multiple paired texts
  2. Visuals, media, animations, short films, etc.
  3. Annotated bibliographies
  4. Playlists, and Annotated bibliographies as playlists
  5. Question Formulation Technique
  6. Discussions
  7. Anchor charts
  8. Graphic Organizers

At this point in the year, it’s the time to regroup and reassess. We’ll go to the end of the semester (January 25) with a novel unit and then start fresh again for the second semester. My students will be allowed to self-assess their strengths and growth areas. And maybe, like me, they’ll read something that stretches their abilities all on ‘their own’ and know that the resources are there to bolster, not replace their brilliance.

Summer Series of Saves: analysis is life

@gacruz_phd

“Try That in a Small Town”, Polysemy, and Ideological Fragments #teachersoftiktok #popculture #phd #academia #jasonaldean #music #greenscreen

♬ original sound – Dr. C

Key phrases I learned from his video, ones I knew, and all of them I need to share with students:

Ideological fragment: Dr. Cruz explores how a piece of media can be an ideological fragment, meaning a piece or artifact that represents an larger ideology (belief system).

Transgressions: Wrong-doing against others.

Extralegal: Definition (not sanctioned by the law)

Polysemy: having multiple meanings

Yes, I did Venmo him some cash for his content. You should, too.

Now, next school year when I provide instruction on analyzing media (literature, poetry, videos, etc.) and through the lens of facts, opinions, and truth, as well as poetry instruction (revised from Mud & Ink) What an amazing #mentortext to discuss our purposes for analyzing and discussing the media we consume.

Essay, that’s what I say

These are a fraction of books about writing I have collected over the years.

Great conversations happening regarding writing and the teaching of writing — here are some of my current noticings/wonderings, and attempts at supporting students craft their writing lives.

Every student who asks, “How many sentences does it have to be?” has been exposed to either Jane Schaffer or another prescriptive writing curriculum. There is nothing inherently good or bad in Schaffer’s program: some need a paint-by-number mode of writing instruction, and the product serves the purposes. But we teachers, and I mean all teachers, will be forever stuck in the siloing of teaching writing poorly across content areas. And when I say “writing,” I don’t necessarily mean typing out lengthy tomes: writing can be many forms and avenues. Across content areas, teachers should focus on the Role of the writer, audience, the form, the topic, and strong word choices.

Here are some Sunday-morning-I’m-still-sleepy resources:

Moving to the comprehensive high school, I’m currently teaching two periods of 10th grade, one 9th grade honors ELA, (and yes, have already had a debate with one young student about the merits of the What It Says graphic organizer– my sweet summer child, I know you), and two periods of 9th grade ELA. And yes, after being somewhat scolded about how they’ve used Jane Schaffer forever, I had another deeper conversation with my evaluator about how it was okay that I looked and researched the materials, and then collaborate with my PLC about instructional methods. Cool, cool, I can do that. I totally can. And, I can also go back through my previous blog posts and share them again, along with other resources:

Again, this is just a fraction of resources, and it can be overwhelming. My instructional advice is to start with fostering students’ ideas; ultimately, this is what serves them and their creative growth. You may find a different path that meets your students’ needs, and that’s the joy of this process.

Moving on.

Yesterday was a terrible day. Nothing in particular happened to me or mine personally, and maybe it was just the last seven months, inside of four years, and the lack of healthy spiritual oxygen to my brain and soul. Our country is in its most precarious place now, and maybe I’m just sick with anger. Anger poisons, doesn’t it? A caustic oxidation process that burns away hope.

But that was yesterday. I turned things off for a bit, watched The Queen’s Gambit (saved the last episode for tonight)! The anger, though, is still there, like a feral cat who demands food but accepts no love or comfort. What do I crave, what will I be denied?

I want an apology.

I want an apology from colleagues who use their power and privilege to stop conversations and dialogue that seems to threaten them. And I want an apology from every teacher who voted for Trump.

I want an apology from parents and teachers who don’t “believe” their children should be allowed to read “that book” (but never seem to have an issue with white authors/protagonists). Teachers who use the word “indoctrination” in social media groups. I want an apology from 57% of white women voters in this nation for confusing fear with male gaze. My dears: they are looking right past you, and stepping on your Botox to get to their true prize: patriarchal power.

Did they get you to trade
Your heroes for ghosts?
Hot ashes for trees?
Hot air for a cool breeze?
Cold comfort for change?
Did you exchange
A walk on part in the war
For a lead role in a cage?

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And for pity’s sake, people, WE KNOW:

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I want us to create a mandate.

To not accept less for our students and their families.

We understand and teach science, evolution, anti-racist practices, know how to dismantle conspiracy theorists, teach culturally relevant and responsive practices, use Zinn Education, Teaching Tolerance, Facing History, #DisruptTexts, ProjectLit, #1619Project, and parents are not allowed to censor texts wholesale, we listen to BIPOC parents and students when they bring attention to texts that harm, are racist, bigoted and of poor scholarly quality. We support teachers and students who want to read a wide variety of texts and decolonize curriculum. We teach civics, political discourse, the consequences of platforms and policies, the mechanics of power. We teach consent and healthy views of our bodies, our lives, and our communities.

Oh, and those apologies? Keep ’em. And if you can’t come up with one, get out of the way, please. I’m not waiting. We’ve got work to do.

Grateful: Book Talk Revisited

A few months ago, I made this book talk video and posted it on YouTube. I confess, I did try to find out how to pronounce words correctly, but I still goofed up.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gp6DwT7c9eI&t=17s

And yesterday I received an email correcting me on a few points:

I added the email text to the video, and kept the original video because I want to share this with students this next school year. This is how we learn. One of my plans for my own learning this summer is to read more and reflect on Indigenous peoples in North America. Monise Seward and I were going to do this. I feel behind in my progress, but will show myself a little grace–I put it on my calendar for this weekend, and will continue to grow.

In the meantime, I feel so much gratitude to this teacher for helping me.

Series: White People Homework: All Posts

All 30 Posts from Series: White People Homework

1 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/02/equality/

2 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/03/series-white-people-homework-2/

3 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/04/series-wph-militarizing-3/

4 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/05/series-wph-teach-your-children-well-4/

5 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/06/series-wph-know-your-history-5/

6 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/07/series-wph-fear-6/

7 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/08/series-white-people-homework-white-teachers-7/

8 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/09/series-white-people-homework-the-cost-8/

9 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/10/series-white-people-homework-the-cost-9/

10 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/10/series-white-people-homework-joy-10/

11 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/11/series-white-people-homework-11/

12 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/12/series-white-people-homework-12-bad-behaviors/

13 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/13/series-white-people-homework-statues-13/

14 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/14/series-white-people-homework-whats-in-a-name-14/

15 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/15/series-white-people-homework-lets-talk-15/

16 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/16/series-white-people-homework-educators-part-116/

17 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/17/series-white-people-homework-educators-2-17/

18 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/18/series-white-people-homework-poetry-18/

19 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/19/series-wph-juneteenth-19/

20 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/20/series-white-people-homework-20-who/

21 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/21/series-white-people-homework-21-solstice/

22 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/22/series-white-people-homework-22-canon-fodder/

23 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/23/series-white-people-homework-23-will-this-be-on-the-test/

24 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/24/series-white-people-homework-24-moving-on/

25 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/25/series-white-people-homework-25-forever-young/

26 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/26/series-white-people-homework-26the-question/

27 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/27/series-white-people-homework-27-reflection/

28 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/28/series-white-people-homework-28-money-support-the-work/

29 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/29/series-white-people-homework-29-elijah-mcclain/

30 https://mrskellylove.com/2020/06/30/series-white-people-homework-30-love/

Series: White People Homework (28) Money: support the work

Look for the voices who are doing the work with love, excellence and sharing. And support them.

This is what I wrote in 2018, and my question ‘is this the best we can hope for?’ lacked in hope and vision. But thank goodness others have taken up the work, and helped us (teachers) continue to grow and learn.

My inadequate hope.

Fortunately, Shea Martin, Lizzie Fortin, and many others keep sharing their thinking.

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And it’s almost payday: donate to this, even if they’ve exceeded their goal:

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Series: White People Homework (27) Reflection

This might hurt a little.

Too bad.

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White people: fair warning. This might hurt a little. But you’re tough, right? You can take criticism, reflect, pray, meditate, and reconsider your opinion if you realize it’s doing harm to others. I mean, golden rule and all that. You get it. But–if you don’t–or if you’re still convinced that this conversation is boring or doesn’t pertain to you, not sure we can find common ground. I’m not sure how much I want to backtrack to pick you up, where you got lost at the tourist trap or the roadside attraction of “not me-ism.” But when you catch up, I’ll try to be here for you. I can’t guarantee.

White people, stop asking us to educate you about racism

How Moderate Teachers Perpetuate Educational Oppression by Lisa Kelly

Before you share an MLK quote, understand that you’re quoting a proud political radical

There Is No Such Thing as a ‘White Ally’ by Catherine Pugh, Esq.

How Get Out deconstructs racism for white people

  • Zeitgeist: the defining spirit or mood of a particular period of history as shown by the ideas and beliefs of the time.”the story captured the zeitgeist of the late 1960s”