Summer Series of Saves #2024: dismantling the essay

I am unsure where the wheels fell off the bus this year, and I can’t pinpoint the moment—maybe I was trying to do too much, or maybe the students are still recovering from 2020, perhaps? (And also, as an aside, I went to look up prior posts about this, and WordPress has done this weird thing with some of my links. I shall deal with this later.) Some students went to my prinicipal and complained about a few things, one of them being I gave them “too many essays” to write. Now, some of these “essays” were focused on parts of an essay, trying new things, and quick writes. I told them time and again this is what they need to know how to do now and for the rest of their academic careers.

They took it personally.

One of the grand and perpetual expectations of we ELA teachers is we teach how to write essays, and there is no shortage of advice, materials, books, PD, from the creative to the formulaic, we have mentor texts, learning targets, dissection of the whole and constructing the deconstructed.

So what’s my plan for this year? Again, try to organize it in a way that students get it. I am focused on the success of a few students sprinkled throughout the day, from GenEd to Honors, who used the graphic organizers and materials I provided and pushed through them to truly get how they help and scaffold essay writing.

But moreoever, I am exhausted by the individuality of teaching: the whole-class instruction does not seem to be working, and there is no one cause or factor. Setting up partner groups immediately for workshop might be one fix to this– more on this later. (Thinking Dr. Catlin Tucker’s work on stations…). I have had great success with the Puget Sound Writing Project/National Writing Project’s workshop model for years, but this year…oof. Maybe it was all that time isolated from other humans?

The plan: this post is somewhat of a placeholder for my thoughts and a launch pad: next I’ll organize the calendar of what happens when, and why, for students. Stay tuned.

Essay List

Some other posts about essay writing:

Summer Series of Saves: Dismantling the Essay (III)

My goal this summer includes curating a new concept of what an essay is and can be. 

I sent my request out to the good educators on Twitter, tagging @ncte and @writingproject, and received a few ideas. Some switched up the medium, such as “do a video essay” and that’s partly what I was looking for, but not quite. I’m looking for essays that don’t feel like the rigid essays of “school” — one of the most unnatural forms of structured writing.

This post doesn’t have answers yet, or the curated list. It’s a start, a placeholder for the process. My goal is to encourage and foster true excitement about what essay writing is, and reading of essays. Though I have bristled over the structured, formulaic writing of essays it’s a love of reading essays that motivates me. I don’t want students to hate writing. None of us do. So why do we keep ignoring all the rich content and mentor texts that are shared? Not a single writer uses the five-paragraph structure. I can understand its use as a foundation, but we need to have some hard conversations about when to take the scaffold away.